Very strong poem. I love it, don't stop writing.

Awww thats really good liked the title too well done xx

I like this poem. It posses great beauty in its simplicity and you managed to express really strong emotions on interesting way.
Punctuation cloud better. I like the ending and the tone of the piece flowed really well.

Great poem. It's a great idea to have formulated like this. I love the last stanza. It's awesome ;-)