Together

by Sara   May 5, 2008


Oceans, Lakes, Rivers, and Streams
They all link together, thats how it seems.
Roses are red and the sky is baby blue
Thats how it goes, just like me and you.
Like a rainbow after rain or a wave upon the sand
Thats how we belong, always hand in hand.

So take my hand and we will go
To a place that no one will ever know.
Its just me and you in our own little world
A world that is surrounding just us two.
So tell me that you love me as you look me in the eye
And I'll tell you that I love you and I shall ne'er it deny.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    Thats a lovely poem,
    excellent wording and everything,
    so understandable even tho its short,
    u got right to the point, and shwed so much feeling, in wat little u said,
    but even tho in wat little u said made ur poem seem so much bigger, and for that i word say this is an excellent work or art.

  • 16 years ago

    by girly

    Wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    "Like a rainbow after rain or a wave upon the sand
    Thats how we belong, always hand in hand.
    "

    i loved that one , you really did a good job here, marvelous !!

    i really enjoyed that!! good topic , great metaphores, simply great one!!
    a 5 for you defnitely!

  • 16 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    This is one of my fav poems I really like this one 10/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    I really enjoyed this poem
    it was great
    good job
    keep it up

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