Comments : Together

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    Wow i really love this....very well written....beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    This poem is cute, short but sweet. I enjoyed the rhyme scheme of the poem. Overall great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    I really enjoyed this poem
    it was great
    good job
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by MR F R 3 S H

    This is one of my fav poems I really like this one 10/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    "Like a rainbow after rain or a wave upon the sand
    Thats how we belong, always hand in hand.
    "

    i loved that one , you really did a good job here, marvelous !!

    i really enjoyed that!! good topic , great metaphores, simply great one!!
    a 5 for you defnitely!

  • 16 years ago

    by girly

    Wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    Thats a lovely poem,
    excellent wording and everything,
    so understandable even tho its short,
    u got right to the point, and shwed so much feeling, in wat little u said,
    but even tho in wat little u said made ur poem seem so much bigger, and for that i word say this is an excellent work or art.