Hand of Sorrow

by Paralyzed   May 5, 2008


Hand of sorrow,
Sands of time,
Find no reason,
See no rhyme.

Random acts,
Selfish deeds,
The world is full,
Of wants and needs.

Always searching,
Never found,
Secrets hidden,
In the ground.

The past is buried,
Deep inside,
Freeze the heart,
And bend the mind.

Tears of sorrow,
Joyous smiles,
Shouts of love,
Screamed denials.

Every feeling,
Felt in time,
Brings a reason,
To the rhyme.

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  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I have to say WOW.
    This was... AMAZING.
    I could not find one flaw in this. I am simply blown away at how everything flowed. The rhymes just rolled off the tongue, and though they weren't exactly unique rhymes, the flow and beat of this over powered that.
    I loved the ending. How there is a reason for it all. Perfection.
    Thanks for entering my contest!
    GOOD LUCK!

    5/5
    ~Lace

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    I love this so well written and just amazing all around