Comments : Hand of Sorrow

  • 16 years ago

    by jane

    I love this so well written and just amazing all around

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I have to say WOW.
    This was... AMAZING.
    I could not find one flaw in this. I am simply blown away at how everything flowed. The rhymes just rolled off the tongue, and though they weren't exactly unique rhymes, the flow and beat of this over powered that.
    I loved the ending. How there is a reason for it all. Perfection.
    Thanks for entering my contest!
    GOOD LUCK!

    5/5
    ~Lace