by jane May 5, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
You will never know |
by Elizabeth
I like how short your poems are .... you get right down to the point; it doesn't matter if they rhyme or even if they make sense to anyone else besides you, and I think that's what makes them beautiful. Good job, keep it up! |
by simplyshay
Amazing. |
Love is tough, many people we have feels for don't know that we'd be willing to risk our life for them, nicely done 5/5 |
by Ash
Once again your simplity is well expressed herein and the repetition also adds another effect to the overall mood of the poem. 5/5 |
by No one
I like it, short but sweet and very powerful, the short sentences really keep the reader intrigued and although that one long line kinda disturbes the flow of it, other than that, it was a good piece. |