Never know

by jane   May 5, 2008


You will never know
How much i love you
You will never know
How much i care
You will never know
How much you mean to me
You will never know
How many bullets i would take for you
You will never know
What it would have been
If you would have loved me the same way
You will never know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    I like how short your poems are .... you get right down to the point; it doesn't matter if they rhyme or even if they make sense to anyone else besides you, and I think that's what makes them beautiful. Good job, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by simplyshay

    Amazing.
    ______xoxo.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Love is tough, many people we have feels for don't know that we'd be willing to risk our life for them, nicely done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    Once again your simplity is well expressed herein and the repetition also adds another effect to the overall mood of the poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    I like it, short but sweet and very powerful, the short sentences really keep the reader intrigued and although that one long line kinda disturbes the flow of it, other than that, it was a good piece.

    keep it up =)
    xxxx

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