O my gosh! I love it! i actually wrote one kind of like this myself. very good poem and it shows how a lot of people feel about people they like. good work!

Beautiful repitition. And your short style is mastered nicely. The poems... are briliant when touching emotions. =)

It was nice you express alot of feelings in this poem. it really didnt roll of the tip of my tounge like i wanted it too but at least i read til' the end. it was short but u know where you were going with the message. i felt you could have said alot more.

over all it was good and your getting the hang of it. 4/5

Great job.
The repetition in this piece keeps the message strong.
I like that it is not dragged on just for length.
Keep writing.

Nice use of repitition with short powerful words, Keeps the reader at attention and holds them to the end, good read, great write.

I like it, short but sweet and very powerful, the short sentences really keep the reader intrigued and although that one long line kinda disturbes the flow of it, other than that, it was a good piece.

keep it up =)
xxxx

Once again your simplity is well expressed herein and the repetition also adds another effect to the overall mood of the poem. 5/5

Love is tough, many people we have feels for don't know that we'd be willing to risk our life for them, nicely done 5/5

Amazing.
______xoxo.

I like how short your poems are .... you get right down to the point; it doesn't matter if they rhyme or even if they make sense to anyone else besides you, and I think that's what makes them beautiful. Good job, keep it up!