Too Few Things

by Curing the Comon Cliche   May 5, 2008


...
...
Ok
...
...
mhm
...
...
Be right back
((I need a small vacation
I'm not going anywhere
But neither is this conversation))
...
...
Laughing out loud
((No, wait, thats not true
I'm just out of words
Too few things to say to you))
...
...
((Am I too numb to force out words?
Or is there nothing left to say?
I'll drain out two more letters
Something like))
Ok
...
...
...
((I'm running out of words
So this is how the poem ends
I'll keep on these fake smiles
I won't hurt you again))

WOW, I have to be the most boring person in the world to tlk to on IM.
...=what other person is saying
(())= what I am thinking
if its out of the brackets its what I'm saying

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I realted well to this as i think many others who read it will. good job xx

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    See. it's like talking to a brick wall when you're numb, jesse. a circular brick wall...

    :S

    ((Am I too numb to force out words?
    Or is there nothing left to say?
    I'll drain out two more letters
    Something like))
    Ok

    ^^ god. is this relatable or what? just kind of summed up my numbness in a few short lines...

    i actually really liked this poem....which is weird, seeing as it's not usually the kind of poem i like...

    5.5