I can't really do a full critque right now, but this poem was amazingly written. You definitely were able to make it dark and a little creepy. Your vocabulary blew me away, and everything was worded just right. This part:

Playfully they whisper,
But will you not answer?
They start to yell;
Why can you not answer?

Fear.
^^Wow. I think it was the best part in the whole poem [and the whole poem was amazing.] You really left me stunned, and so I nominated it for the contest.

Keep writing!
Cayce

Chilling.