by Diva the Chiropteran Queen and a Brokencyde and a Twilight Fan
Wow...nice work and keep it up! |
by Tammie
Okay so I have my own perception of this.. I have no idea if it's right or wrong but I guess that doesn't really matter, I still loved it. |
by Nix
I must say first of all I think that you shouldn't capitalize letters after commas because on that way you lowered intensity of other lines where you need to use full stop. |
Honestly, this is not one of my favorite pieces from you but I still like it a lot. |
Im hopeless lol :) |