Comments : The Wizard Of Oz

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    He calls me Cinderella
    Always there should I fall
    We'll remain friends forever
    Me and my wizard from Oz

    What a great dedication to a lovely person. He is surely worth all the appreciation in the world. He is indeed a very warm and kind person and lucky to have a friend like you.
    Loved this poem as i love the person who wrote it and the person for whom it is dedicated.

    Great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    What a nice dedication to a very well deserving friend...you've done this in a very cute and imaginative way Cindy!

    "He calls me Cinderella
    Always there should I fall
    We'll remain friends forever
    Me and my wizard from Oz"

    ^ cute little play on names....well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    I love how this part is written so magical and sweet;

    "He calls me Cinderella
    Always there should I fall
    We'll remain friends forever
    Me and my wizard from Oz"

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Personally:) A very deeply moving dedication you have written CC. Cleverly written, suiting the title very nicely and as with everyone else, I adored the ending!! Absolutely love this warm heartfelt piece, from the bottom of my heart, thank you so much my friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    Awww, Cindy this is so sweet....
    I heard about this challenge and what a cool and creative idea you did with the title, so perfect hehe
    You have written this brilliantly, it brought a smile to my face. It's got such great rhythm and warmth so very, very heartfelt.
    Beautiful Cindy, well done, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    I loved that poem ,a truely lovely write and so beautifully done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Cindy,

    Sam is lucky to have such a devoted friend:)
    Friendship poems always make me smile because, in a way, they are more special than love poems. A real friend is hard to find:)

    Love, Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    That was so imaginative and vivid to the point that I could feel it. It felt so real and powerful and fits together so perfectly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    This is beautifuuly written... Im glad that you have frnd who is dere for you in every step...I think im lucky to have such frnds... who will support me...cheer me up wen im low...and ya tell me that wished do come true...

    .. so beautifully you captured these feelings in the poem... it made me miss my frnds a lot..

    "Rainbows filled the sky above
    Beautiful songbirds began to sing
    The world became much brighter
    Radiating love for all things"

    ^^ wow.. this is so sweet... wonderfully described...

    Brilliant write...

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Wat a dedication Cindy..

    N wats written in d poem is so true......

    N tat only a true dreamer or a philoosopher can understand..

    Loved this magical poem..

    keep writing..

    best wishz..

    karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Another great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Beautifull!!!!!
    really love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    A really beautiful poem.
    Magical and a great picture writing.
    You have a lucky friend.

    Take care