Why cant i

by jane   May 5, 2008


Why cant i just let you go
Why cant you just leave my heart
Like you were never there
Why cant i just get rid of
Every memory we ever had
Why wont my heart just let me forget you
Every trace of you is gone
But the love i have for you is still here
Why wont it just go away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    Wow this was sad but very good. I can really relate to what your saying in this piece. i can feel the emotion you put into this. Plz feel free to check out my work sometime. keep it up 5/5
    ~Forever Broken~

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    You need to add some punctuation, because now its just a big block of text. I can really relate to this because it's what I am going through at this time in my life. Nice piece of work, maybe you could extend it a little.

    Thanks for commenting on mine =)
    xxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    Awww...
    i like it. it sucks really. what your going through
    i know. =] just keep writing and expressing yourself. ; )

  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    This is what I will write sometimes great job

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