This is what I will write sometimes great job

Awww...
i like it. it sucks really. what your going through
i know. =] just keep writing and expressing yourself. ; )

You need to add some punctuation, because now its just a big block of text. I can really relate to this because it's what I am going through at this time in my life. Nice piece of work, maybe you could extend it a little.

Thanks for commenting on mine =)
xxxxx

Wow this was sad but very good. I can really relate to what your saying in this piece. i can feel the emotion you put into this. Plz feel free to check out my work sometime. keep it up 5/5
~Forever Broken~