Walking in the rain
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX May 5, 2008
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Walking in rain no one around, just alone on this cold day in May. I wish you were here to keep me warm, to hold me through the night, but you are no where to found. Is there anyone out there who can take me home? Walking in the rain wishing you were here, but I am all alone in this place, where time stand still and where there is no sound. |
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16 years ago
by Andrew
Nice poem, short and i really loved it. There is always that someone in the rain, ready to take you home, just open your eyes wide and will notice them in the horizon. Liked your concept. Keep up
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16 years ago
by Grace
I love this soooooo much "chirssy"!!! LOL
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16 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Chris,
I like the emothion in this piece. A well written piece.
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16 years ago
by Ares
I really like the way you poured yourself in to this poem, makes for a great poem
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16 years ago
by Lonely Rider
Beautiful and hearfelt lines...
The repetition of the lines makes it even more beautiful..
This is what rain can do to most people...
a good read..
