Really good poem! and you are very good at ryming things!
dont mean to be picky but you spell happyer as happier
haha sorry!
5/5 :)

O that is so sweet i wish someone would write me something like that.
it was great i loved it
keep it up
5/5

Really amazing.
u must have a lot of patience to actually rhyme ur poems, cause i just write wat i want, but i wish i cud rhyme like that all the time.
it was really sweet and well penned.
gr8 job
5/5