Forsaken

by Heba   May 5, 2008


I always feel that I am for-saken
I feel that my soul was taken
Out from my body, when my heart was broken
Once and once again
I am so near to lose my brain
I am so near to be insane
Pain and sorrow are the only treasure that I could gain

I am staying there alone
Crying and shivering from skin to bone
Sinking in sadness and desperation
Giving up my hope to isolation
In that small chamber
Memorizing bad moments that are hard to remember

I remembered that I was a perfect pretender
Showing people you're my best friend, and you were so tender
While you was so cruel
You treated me like I am a fool

Whenever I ask you for help
You just leave me and go back a step
Until you became far away, to the point that I can't see you

When I cry, you just feel happy
You show me no care
Instead you tell people: it is better for her
Sorry, but I need to go
Because it is something I can't bare

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    *Excellent keep it on i love ur poems !

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    I am staying there alone
    Crying and shivering from skin to bone
    Sinking in sadness and desperation
    Giving up my hope to isolation"

    This stanza attracted me the most...The whole poem is awesome..by the way I was in the same situation someday but we have to go through bad and horrible experiences to learn ...and we gotta move on in all cases...Bad memories will vanish and the lessons we learned will stay..
    Great poem ..plz keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Ohh God i feel like i'm that person in ur poem ! A lot of depression and grief haunted me 4a long time,bas thanks God i'm still surving after all that !
    We need some bad experiences in our lives in order 2grow a strong woman or man in us ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    I absolutely loved reading this poem. I think everyone can relate to that situation and those feelings...they just don't like 2 admit it. well done, that was a honest portrayal of the truth! keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow
    very deep poem
    i can feel your pain, i really can

    loved this part alot

    "I am so near to lose my brain
    I am so near to be insane
    Pain and sorrow are the only treasure that I could gain

    I am staying there alone
    Crying and shivering from skin to bone
    Sinking in sadness and desperation
    Giving up my hope to isolation"

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