~oh beautiful one
For your day
Is finally
Over.
For you..
Can fool
everyone,
But
yourself.~
my fav. line
ur a super cool poet, keep it up

This is AMAZING babe...
you know i will be here if you ever need a shoulder to cry on... or an ear to listen.

great job!

Ashely

Wow i know this exact feeling i like this poem quite a bit its written defferently but it worked good job keep up the writing!! 5/5

Laura