Just An Illusion

by 0oAshleyo0   May 5, 2008


An illusion of happiness,
the illusion of joy..

of love,
and heartache,
of pain,
and tears....

No more will i trust my heart....
Even though i know its right....
Because it brought me PAIN...
That i never want to feel again..

Goodbye Love...
Find someone new to torture...
I'm done playing your games.

XxAshleyxX

*just so you know, this isn't supposed to rhyme, or be in rythym... its just my expression of what is running through my mind. i didnt want it to rhyme because i felt it would make it look "cheap". Thanks for reading it*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    It didn't need to rhyme, it was perfect the way it was lol and that's good that you're done with it.

  • 16 years ago

    by blind soul

    Well to start that was a beatufull and great poem! i love it and it will all work out i pomise! but ya keep up the great work!^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    This was on overall great poem.
    ((written by an even greater person ;) tehehe))
    I liked your word choice.
    but your structure.. didn't work for me.
    But i'm a weird person.. lol!!!
    Great message that came across in this.
    But i hate that its coming from you.
    Dont give up babe!
    Someone is out there for you..
    i know it.
    Hang in there and keep your head held high.
    Ily!!
    And again.. splendiferious poem!!! :]

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