This was on overall great poem.
((written by an even greater person ;) tehehe))
I liked your word choice.
but your structure.. didn't work for me.
But i'm a weird person.. lol!!!
Great message that came across in this.
But i hate that its coming from you.
Dont give up babe!
Someone is out there for you..
i know it.
Hang in there and keep your head held high.
Ily!!
And again.. splendiferious poem!!! :]

Well to start that was a beatufull and great poem! i love it and it will all work out i pomise! but ya keep up the great work!^_^

It didn't need to rhyme, it was perfect the way it was lol and that's good that you're done with it.