Love vs. Hate

by Meme   May 5, 2008


Love
is the blood that
flows in your veins
and makes your heart
beat each and everyday

Hate
is the poison that
runs in your veins
and makes your heart
break into million pieces

Love
is the light that
shines in your way
and keeps you guided
wherever you go

Hate
is the darkness that
covers your life
and stops you from
finding the right way

Love
is the companionship that
surrounds your heart
like a breeze of air that
makes you feel alive

Hate
is the loneliness that
wraps your heart
and squeeze it until
you longer still alive

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© Copyright 2008 by: gIrL
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  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Love and hate soo strong opposit words but still seprated by soo little line ...

    you ahte more a person if you love him more

    your description of both is great ^_^

    sometimes to kill a love , you need hate , you need poision to kill a lonly love , ...
    great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Man, i am pulling for hate in this poem. just a bunch of stuff going on. Well, you go Girl. lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow, nice poem. Loved the comparison, though I disagree love and hate are not always different opposite things sometimes they are just the same. Sometimes love can turn into hatred, and ruin all those peaceful emotions. Sometimes love can lead to hatred.
    Still great poem.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    An excellent poem.You have defined love and hate fantastically which no scholar even could define.A Great job.I am adding it to my favourite poem list.keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Alwas theres a thin margin between luv n hate..

    Wow.. so nicely written..

    Keep it up,

    Best wishes,

    Karan

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