Self

by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX   May 5, 2008


Dear self

why do i cry wishing to die
why did she say goodbye
why did she leave me alone
why did she lie to my face
why do i cut myself to feel
why do i cry me self to sleep
why do i care about her anymore
why do i still love her
why do i still need her here to breath
well this is the end for me
the crying will stop
the pain will go away
and i can move on with my life.
so i have to say GOODBYE!@

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lima Pappa

    Why is self petty easier than standing up?

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Strong poem this is well written xx keep it up x

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "why do i cry wishing to die
    why did she say goodbye"

    I like how your asking questions, and I like your rhyme scheme here.

    "why do i care about her anymore
    why do i still love her
    why do i still need her here to breath"

    I like your honesty in this poem. Very good job.

    "and i can move on with my life.
    so i have to say GOODBYE!@ "

    I like how you started off in letter format with "Dear self" And ended with goodbye, it really sounded like you were having a conversation with yourself. good job

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    I LOVE THIS. the flow, the ending. the words just have a brilliant, strong poetic flow my fav

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