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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Nice work!

    Here we are
    standing face to face,
    realizing we can’t go on.

    Not after the things you said
    and the things you did.
    Not after all the lies and betrayals.

    So many tears
    I have cried for you.
    I’m just tired of it all.

    So now I must say goodbye
    and put this all behind me.
    You however will remember me
    and all these things you have done

    Well done, a heartfelt piece.

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Nice. i like it. arent we all tired of crying. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Oh wow...I really liked this poem! =]]!!

  • 16 years ago

    by all4you

    I really like this! things get tough...but we all find ways to deal with it...Great Work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by william

    Faceing things helps, that way they cant stab you in the bak

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Now here is one i can relate to. this is very good