Comments : My parasite

  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    Wow really emotional. I love the use of your "temple" really great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow. i love it. very well written and good choice of wording. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Intresting and sad aswell. u can write good sad poetry... a nicely written sad poem... you got 5 again