I'd bring heaven to your eyes

by Gizmo   May 5, 2008


I would climb the heavens,
and pull the milky way to the ground,
just to see a glimmer of happiness,
i don't expect a smile or a sound.

i would swim every ocean,
and fight my whole way there
but i would rather run a mile,
than hear you say you don't care.

i would climb every mountain,
i'd bring heaven to your eyes,
but i know it won't change a thing.
because i guess there was one too many lies.

i would do anything in this universe,
and baby, i swear that is true,
but no matter what i try,
ive already went and lost you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Would do anything in this universe,
    and baby, i swear that is true,
    but no matter what i try,
    ive already went and lost you.

    this stanza is such a great stanza.. and such a sad poem.. its so deep writing... and im almost want to cry.. cuz its realy relates to me.. excellent
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    A poem that has all d herculean arts n who wud not want to do impossible things possible just 2 give a smile to sumone... sumone special...

    Lovely though n lovely poem,

    keep writing,

    best wishz.... Karan

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Loved it well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    Awww this is really sweet :3
    other than the one spelling error, well done!
    5/5 from me, keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    Very well done but error in second part. spelling is important. EVERY*

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