I can totally relate to this right now!! definitely keep writing!

Aw!!..it was really sweet.. i think it seems a little bit sloppy...but it might just be me..
looking over that,
i totaly loved it!!!
it had great messege u know?..like the ones who we love end up leaving us, and then they realize that we were the "one",,,and they let us go...sad sad sad!

good job!
Aly

A classic tale of one being face with a decision of having to choose. It should be simple though, you're right, it just that some guys are not that smart when they see what the options are. Guys don't think of the future, generally, they think of superficial things. I really liked this poem. Anger and frustration are apparent but it isn't "in your face!" present. Love and pain are mixed with disappointment with the potential lead-on to grief. But you still make yourself a winner in the end by saying that he "will realize that [you were] the one and [he] let [you] go." I love it.

I really like this. It is so powerful. i've never actually been through anything like that, but this poem tells the story.

Its sweet...and i think kinda lot girl can relate this to themselves ;(

I really like your poems they are diffent taht is what makes them special! 5/5 Caleb H=)