I love it.. lol.. nice work.. great job.. trav!!.. 5/5.. ^-^

Awww bro, you wont have to show fake smiles for long.this is a poem that is goin in the book.5/5
**harlea

It's looks as thought you spent a lot of time on this poem, great work.
The mood of the poem is very gloomy but it's still captivating none the less.
The flow is nicley done, excellent job
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Awwwww....sad but you shouldnt have to fake smiles for anyone or anybody you are who u are and ppl will either like or hate but you have ppl who love you
5/5
Excellent Job!!!

Awww excellent work!! xxx