Comments : Slipping Flower

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Oh, hind this is so beautiful. I love the wording, and i love this stanza.

    Now it seems distant from me
    The botany, familiar, it is not
    Everything I had once known
    It seems to be, I have forgot

    i dont know how you intended it to be but when i read that, it has so much hidden meaning.

    well done, love you!