I know your pain

by Fan Angeleo   May 6, 2008


So you want to take
away what's mine, my heart
my soul cursed unkind.
Cuts bruises pleases you find.
I have no anger left in me
but my weakness have you
desired.

Now my troubles got worse when
you push me over. I am hurt and
offended by your pleasure.
How long am I to suffer, stay far
away and never let me cry.

I am lost in your world and I am of
no existence. Why Why I don't want to
die. No No last thing on my mind.
I have love life solid worth more than gold
I choose to live and not be sold as a toy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I loved the way you divided this poem up..it is interesting. it shows you were more focused on the words than the flow...and i liked it. kind of choppy, but in a wonderful, blunt painful way.

    I am lost in your world and I am of
    no existence

    ^^ this is so relatable to so many people. how a person can be alone in a crowd of a thousand is beyond me..but it's the truth.

    great job, hun. i liked it. ^.^

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww so sad, well done for wrting it out xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    Wow how sad i hope things get beter...
    great poem tho 5/5

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