Wow how sad i hope things get beter...
great poem tho 5/5

Awww so sad, well done for wrting it out xxx

I loved the way you divided this poem up..it is interesting. it shows you were more focused on the words than the flow...and i liked it. kind of choppy, but in a wonderful, blunt painful way.

I am lost in your world and I am of
no existence

^^ this is so relatable to so many people. how a person can be alone in a crowd of a thousand is beyond me..but it's the truth.

great job, hun. i liked it. ^.^