Comments : World in decay.....we have hope

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    A lot of people should see and take heed of this. You really did your homework on this. You made your point flawlessly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    So true, everything you said is very true, you expressed yourself and you view wonderfuly

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Very good poem i loved it great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    (((((10/5))))))))

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Wow, amazing message, and phenominaly writen as well

  • 15 years ago

    by Grace

    Cool poem!! 5/5 =)

  • 15 years ago

    by Taylor

    Loved the message. actually loved everything about this poem:)
    really well written.
    keep it up!
    :D
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Enigma

    For someone who considers himself immature, this poem was both very serious and deep :P

    The first poem of yours i have read, but i reckon I'll read more :)
    Good Job, 5 :)

  • 14 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Totally liked this poem. It on a topic that I very much enjoy. I think the universe is powered by love and that light always breaks through the darkness. We as people do need to unite and fight against the darkness. Of course by giving, and being more loving.
    Excellent piece 5/5

    Read my poem matter And Gravity in return for my reading yours. In doing so I will read and review another of yours too!