Love the blunt and real truth of it all. "Like me back, damnit!" I also like the fact that the consistency in syllables and rhyme made the poem flow without awkward glitches and re-reading. Thanks for a poem worth reading :D

If i had anything left to cry with, jesse, i would be sobbing at this point. if only if only..

What's true is that I fell
What's true is you did not
What's true is I'm not enough
Not sexy, amazing, hot...

^^ oh. god. this made me think of another Jessi in this world...how she gets to be amazing..how i don't.

you're amazing Jesse, whether she sees that or not. amazingness is often times selective...it's in the eye of the beholder, unfortunately. and it hurts, but it's the truth. what a lovely, painful truth, eh?

((that's the longest comment i've left in four days...lol))

5.5

W.o.w. i can totally understand where you're coming from, and you put it into such amazing words! gr8 job! i luv all of your poems! theyre so amzingly beautiful!
<3
5/5

Could you fall?

im pretty sure that answer is a yes....
:]

Thanks again for putting this poem up even when you never planned for me to read it