A long poem but each line, each word was worth reading this poem <3
I love how you express your feelings so deeply.
5/5

Cheers xo

A piece that yearns and was hurt at the same time.. actually this is a good poem and it is nice that you have such great ideas but i'm not used to reading very long poems, you can make simpler and short but at the same time have the same content and emotions.. anyway, good poem and nice flow.