The Dark World

by dark broken eyes   May 6, 2008


I won't let anyone hurt me
My heart is so numb with all the pain
I don't wanna cry no more
I just want to live alone

I don't wanna smile again
A fake smile for others to see that I'm strong
A fake smile for others to see I'm contented
But deep inside my soul is screaming in pain

I'm tired of fighting in this battle called life
I'm accepting my defeat
I'm a loser, a coward
I hate being me

If there's one wish running through my head
It is to be gone forever
To be on the other world
Maybe there, I can find the happiness that I'm chasing for...

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  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Well,i know life sucks..but dunt give up wat so ever..keep smiling even if they're fake..who knows maybe they'll be real one day..there's always hope..life goes on..dont stay depressed..laugh and be happy as much as u can..wish u happiness :)..u nicely expressed ur feelings..keep writing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by dark broken eyes

    Tnx for that...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Well all pple will say to you keep going their always light in the end of the tunnel ,
    but form me somtiems, that light pulb may borken simetimes, and somone will tellyou sorry girl their is no light in the end of the tunnel ,

    but i tell you girl ,
    dark might be this life , but you will find every light beam in it a joy when all soo dark ,
    youa re a looser? well that is what you think?? and a periode of time , you will feel

    we all do ,

    the poem is good , but it lack much speicaly in rhyming !!

    good work

  • 16 years ago

    by dandelion

    Well written and nice flow.. keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good work well done xxx

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