Omg, i love it.
it's freaking hot <3
and, the flows perfect.
you put the words together well.

you should take more breaks
if you're going to be writing stuff like this afterwards, lol.

keep it up babe. <3

^.^ I agree wonderful poem indeed. Your rhymes are perfect and the poem flows with ease.

I'm thinking of writing a poem about the same thing, but after reading this master piece :P I doubt it will sound as good as this.

Great job!! This surely deserves a 5/5!!

Damn that is so hott good job

Wow, this is really really good.

Dis is anice poem even though there is a lot of action going on in it

WOW that was helle hott!!!! And like they said it flowed so good!!!! It was very nicely put together! GRATE job!

WOW that was helle hott!!!! And like they said it flowed so good!!!! It was very nicely put together! GRATE job!

Hot hot hot

Lovely. if only every man could just say it like that.

--TheGothicAlbino

Hawt poem & now its my turn.....<3 LUVED iT!!!!