Last drop of the rain

by Lesego   May 6, 2008


Like the last drop of the rain,
Ive finally lost all the pain,
Ive finally run out of tears
and lost all my fears,
the last tear drop of pain.

My eyes are all dried out,
How about the lies
which all this is about,
oh... I've cried and cried,
tried and tried

Yet this silence completes me,
Ive finally lost the voice within me,
Ive reached the point of no return,
all thats unsaid will finally burn,
I'm all cried out,
all thats left is to shout.

I'm vocally speechless,
yet like the last drop of rain
Ive lost all that was sane,
I'm going crazy
I'm loosing it,
Ive lost all I could touch,
thought that it was enough,
but all thats left is dust

Like the last drop of the rain
Ive finally run out of pain,
Like the last drop of the rain
Ive lost all I could gain

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Brillian work here xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I like this poem.

    "Like the last drop of the rain,
    Ive finally lost all the pain,
    Ive finally run out of tears
    and lost all my fears,
    the last tear drop of pain."

    Good start I like the reference about rain throughout the whole poem. Rhyme scheme is good as well. Goes in an AABBA matter which is good for a poem like this.

    "oh... I've cried and cried,
    tried and tried"
    I love repetition in poems either of certain lines or certain words.

    "Ive lost all I could touch,
    thought that it was enough,
    but all thats left is dust"

    Good rhyming, I like the reference to elements in this poem.. Rain, Dust (earth).

    "Like the last drop of the rain
    Ive finally run out of pain,
    Like the last drop of the rain
    Ive lost all I could gain "

    Perfect ending! I love the fact that the rhyme scheme in the final stanza is exactly the same, this makes the poem flow into a beautiful ending. Great write over all. You should check out some of my poems.

More Poems By Lesego