I like this poem.

"Like the last drop of the rain,
Ive finally lost all the pain,
Ive finally run out of tears
and lost all my fears,
the last tear drop of pain."

Good start I like the reference about rain throughout the whole poem. Rhyme scheme is good as well. Goes in an AABBA matter which is good for a poem like this.

"oh... I've cried and cried,
tried and tried"
I love repetition in poems either of certain lines or certain words.

"Ive lost all I could touch,
thought that it was enough,
but all thats left is dust"

Good rhyming, I like the reference to elements in this poem.. Rain, Dust (earth).

"Like the last drop of the rain
Ive finally run out of pain,
Like the last drop of the rain
Ive lost all I could gain "

Perfect ending! I love the fact that the rhyme scheme in the final stanza is exactly the same, this makes the poem flow into a beautiful ending. Great write over all. You should check out some of my poems.

Brillian work here xxx