by abi May 6, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No more lonely cold nights or hearing that I'm bad No more growling belly from the meals I never had No more scorching sunshine with a water bowl thats dry No more complain neighbor's about the noise when I cry No more hearing shut up, get down get out of here No more feeling disliked only peace is in the air Euthanasia is a blessing though some still can't see Why I was ever born, if I weren't meant to be My last day of living was the best I ever had Someone held me very close, I could see she was so sad I kissed the lady's face and she hugged me as she cried I wagged my tail to thank her, then I closed my eyes and..... died. |
by Em
This is really sad and very distressing but also true. 5/5, Em |
by Sourav
I liked your poem. Touchy and sad indeed. It would be great if you break the lines. Just a suggestion. |
by Baby Rainbow
Good work might want to lay it out more broken up xxx |