Comments : We were...

  • 16 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    This is really full of heart, sadness was so real that I and many others feel this way after something like this. This piece has great rhyme, and the flow had such a strong clear and steady beat.
    I love the last line
    "And here I thought you were the one"
    Great ending to the poem, its exactly the right moment, this whole piece I could imagine you telling all this to his face...
    brilliant write, great expressing and releasing, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is sooo touching, and I almost cried it brought back so many memories and bring up to the surface my broken heart! Great emotion and truth you put into it, it really came from your heart, remarkable poem!!