Damn hun is this about the gal you kept telling us about at work? Are you still pursuing her after all these years? Your devotion is admirable but at some point you've got to get on with your life if she's not accepting the love you carry in your heart for her. Great poem, I don't understand how she can resist a romantic like you!

I think alot of us have that one person in our past that we have a hard time letting go. always wondering "what if".
i enjoyed this one very much!

People never forget the ones they loved truly, no matter how painful it was to let them go...We'll always remember...You're a great guy Dennis, you deserve all the best...great loving poem, keep it up 5/5

Cute and it flows well although simply worded and an overuse of filler words...