Dear Friend

by HollyNichole   May 6, 2008


Ok so for everyone that said it wasn't quite finished, here you go. i had some help with it. you know who you are. thanks so much! ily

Dear Friend I must tell you something,
Thats been on my mind everyday.
Please don't judge me,
Just listen to what I have to say.

Dear Friend I must tell you something,
But I'm scared of what you'll think.
I've tried telling you so many times,
And each time, my heart just sinks.

Dear Friend I must tell you something,
I have to listen to my heart.
So It's time for me to tell you,
Because It's tearing me apart.

Dear Friend I must tell you something,
I hope you'll understand.
I can't hold it in any longer,
It's a part of who I am.

Dear Friend I must tell you something,
And I'm sorry if I cry.
I hope this doesn't ruin our friendship,
But I think I might be bi.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Heyyy again lol. Yeah that definitely gave it a more evident ending and to get your point across you don't need really need to be subtle so yeah that was good. Well done

    cheers, josh

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    This is an excellent poem.. Great job i felt the same way when i was trying to come out.. Nice choice of words 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    I must agree with Josh on this one. It was written very well but the ending you chose didn't seem to give the poem the ending it needed. Overall great poem

    -daniel

  • 16 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    I like this poem your good!!! ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria

    O my freakin god i love you o i mean this poem with a passion laugh out loud

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