That one is great to...Im not even kidding lol...your a great poet. You should check out some more of mine...the He/She one is really good....

I think that it's quite good and I like how you used repetition to emphasise the matter. However, and I hope you don't take offense to this, but I felt that it's not quite finished...so yeahhhh up to you but that's what I felt

cheers, josh

Umm..well it's pretty good-except I was left wondering where the end of the letter is-the part thta tells uyour friend what you wrote them to say?4/5

I love your poems your awesome kid keep it up! <3

O my freakin god i love you o i mean this poem with a passion laugh out loud

I like this poem your good!!! ;)

I must agree with Josh on this one. It was written very well but the ending you chose didn't seem to give the poem the ending it needed. Overall great poem

-daniel

This is an excellent poem.. Great job i felt the same way when i was trying to come out.. Nice choice of words 5/5

Heyyy again lol. Yeah that definitely gave it a more evident ending and to get your point across you don't need really need to be subtle so yeah that was good. Well done

cheers, josh