Comments : From the heart!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow i liked this one alot it was really good and i can relate to this too. I fell head over heals for my best friend and this i would say goes for alot of ppl as well!((5))

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    What i ment was alot of ppl can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Rose

    Cheers all i can really say

  • 16 years ago

    by falln angel with broken wings

    I love this soo much babe shes soo lucky

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    This is cute =]
    i like it
    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    A good poem but honestly you dont need to be with one person just cause he/she can make you happy and feel alive once again there are alot of people who are out there and can help you feel and make you smile and wants to run into your arms and collide with your heart!but i did like it good job i liked your emotions.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    A good poem but honestly you dont need to be with one person just cause he/she can make you happy and feel alive once again there are alot of people who are out there and can help you feel and make you smile and wants to run into your arms and collide with your heart!but i did like it good job i liked your emotions.

  • 16 years ago

    by falln angel with broken wings

    I love it great poem hun

  • 15 years ago

    by NoUr

    That was simply amazing...it DID INDEED sound like coming from your heart...i was touched...i enjoyed reading it that i smiled at the end...just pure... :)

    keep writting!

  • 15 years ago

    by Its a love story

    AWWW!!! this poem is so sweet! I absolutely loved it! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This is a very sweet poem =]

    Youv'e displayed your emotions honestly and the flow carries through all 3 stanzas really well. It's nice when somebody has that special someone that can make them smile =]

  • 15 years ago

    by VanityIllusions2

    Wow, she is really lucky. You express your emotions really well :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aw this was beautiful! i loved it.

    "I want to be near you with our hearts as one,"
    ^^that was beautiful! great job!
    Aly.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Molly Beth Dundas

    That was amazing it really touched my.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Nice write... Good expression, and from the heart.

    Very well done :)
    Olwin.

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This is a truly amazing poem. I loved the way you said what you were trying to say. The poem flowed throughout, well done. 5/5 xx

  • 15 years ago

    by cataclysmicSoul

    Beautifully written, this short piece made the poem very easily understandable and showed the pure emotions
    great readx

  • 15 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww... Beautiful! I love it. So simple yet very well-written. Great job!