Sweet Decision (Made in Forest)

by Freedom   May 6, 2008


*I want to tell you few things,but I don't know how should I start,
I am stucked in time,and either in this poem,
so listen:

When I walk on this ground,in this green forest
Birds are singing their pretty songs.
Long grass looks so honest
World seems has no wrong.

And then I slowly close my eyes,decide to take some rest
Breathing hardly comes off from my chest
I would rather play chess-
Because I feel so confessed

You look so good,but I afraid of something new.
You love me?You really do?
Cause if not-I refuse.
I am scared to be hurt again
Since before I was in a strong pain.

Last sun ray twingle on my face
Evening comes,and my heart starts to race.
I can't promise to love you forever
But now I feel like we should be together.
I last time take a look to the sky,
It gives me some courage,so I will try.
I am glad to hear you want to be mine.

And I feel I won't be hurt..not this time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That was a good poem!

    I like the imagery in the first part. I also like how it flowed so well and stayed together.

    Great write!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Loved the last stanza more and although i haven't been in this expreince but i guess i know how you feel of being protective and don't want to be hurt again

  • 16 years ago

    by eehcuhhhz

    This poem seems simple.
    I don't know if it's good/bad simple.
    But that was the first thing that came up in my mind.

    Birds are singing pretty songs?

    You could change that.
    Maybe to even:
    While the birds sing their pretty songs

    It seems as though a fairy tale.

    I don't know.
    Lol.

    It's okay.
    But I bet it can be you can make it better.

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