Wow, that was almost written like someone else. very... adult

Wow, gabs.
another amazing one.
its seems like you always know exactly how i feel.
especially in this poem.
trying to hide the pain under all those layers of "sugar"

I love it gabs!

Reading your poems always makes me feel so much better!

I love reading them and seeing how they get better every single time.
(Although I don't know how you're gonna top this one!)

Keep writing,
And if you can,
Write one for me!
:P
Sophie

Exquisite!! It's absolutely wonderful. I Can totally relate!
5/5

-ally