Love it
5/5

You need to write more

Wow that's hot lol burn baby burn lol

Wow I wanted to stand next to you just to keep warm

Awesome! 5/5

Wow that was amazing great work !
5/5 =]

Sensational!! Very passionate!

Powerful..but maybe it would be better if its longer..you can do bettrer!

Awwww so sweeet xxx

N_n i found that just sooo cute

Superb wordings. Love this poem.

I LOVE LOVE THIS POEM

Oh to be young and in love like this again. very nice images, good words well chosen and placed with care. I could feel their firey breath !!! keep up the good works

Wonderful poem beautiful