Comments : Your Gone

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats so sad, stay strong, keep writing xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Now this one i like , mmm good and even no rhyme , but i can see the feelings and transition of tiem very clear i can understand the feeling here, soo very good one ,

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Very heartfelt and true.
    Nice work