Hereafter Forgotten

by Ash   May 7, 2008


Hereafter Forgotten (Collab with   Bleeding Demons à)

Through the macabre
Of darker night
The crime of pain
Has been sent free

It wasn't punishment seeked,
but a rare blessing beseached.
Contemplation with unknown beings,
led astray to relive old feelings.

From the winters mourn
To the cold beating of
the drum like heart
Only ever bled the pain

The ways of life had suddenly changed,
Distractions of the mind now rearranged.
Each path be far from truth prevailed,
Darkness left the echo's wailed.

In the inner eye of storm
Lay the calmness to behold
The truth longer blind
We have opened to new perspectives

Dreams now scattered upon the oceans waves,
once thought these feelings were part of agonising plays.
But within these memories live more than anything gained,
the platform of ultimate despair attained.

From the memories flow golden light
all of our wishes now becoming true
Happiness now regained
For us the brighter day is that of tomorrow

Soldered away beneath heaven's gate,
the time would come when none would wait.
Two names lie still in memory of that day,
"Hereafter forgotten" will be the last words to say.

(Please note that the free verse sections are written by à Bleeding Demons à )

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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    It's been long since i have read one of yours and it still the same; your poems has great effect on me.
    this collab was wonderful it shows two styles of two great writers

    well done my friends

  • 16 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Purely great job on your part ash i am glad to see it up lol awsome i say 50/5 for each of us that makes 100/5 on the poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    "..The ways of life had suddenly changed,
    Distractions of the mind now rearranged.
    Each path be far from truth prevailed,
    Darkness left the echo's wailed.."

    Gosh,.. after reading this .. all im left with to say is .the wording .. PURELY EXCELLENT!

    I think it simply describes the jjourney/passage into the afterlife.. leaving behind all that we couldnt find ..

    "..Dreams now scattered upon the oceans waves,
    once thought these feelings were part of agonising plays.
    But within these memories live more than anything gained,
    the platform of ultimate despair attained.."

    An amazing piece of how just simple words can stir your soul..

    "..Soldered away beneath heaven's gate,
    the time would come when none would wait.
    Two names lie still in memory of that day,
    "Hereafter forgotten" will be the last words to say.."

    Great Work Here.. im suprised it hasn't been Commented on so much .. its truly a Remarkable Write.. one of the best i've read in a little while ..
    Great Going .. Super Collab =]

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    This was a great collab. you guy work well together. I could feel the emotions pouring out.

    Dreams now scattered upon the oceans waves,
    once thought these feelings were part of agonising plays.
    But within these memories live more than anything gained,
    the platform of ultimate despair attained.

    ^^^ i LOVED THIS STANZA IT WAS VERY DIFFERENT and it rlly grabbed my attention. wonderful job. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Nice cllaboration...

    Keep it up

    Best wishes,
    karan;)

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