Awww so sad. well done for writing this must be so hard. keep writing your workis really good xxx

Because once she as home - shouldnt that be is home? :s

i loved this one hun very touching and powerful and makes it more special that you have written this poem for a friend. well done for writing and thanks for sharing it xxx

That was a really good poem.. YOU ROCK!!!KEEP WRITING!! =)

Wow..this is good......I love the part......

She goes home counting the money she makes,
And she smiles with all the attention she gets,
Because once she as home, she is ignored.
Daddy never cared for her,
He never cared at all.

This is so true......oh my god.....it really is good......great work, as always.lol......be well....Mike....xoxoxoxo

Wow this was really good but also really sad
keep up the good work

p.s. reread your poem before you submit it to make sure there are no typos....

Hey i realli like it.
i especially like this line :
She thinks she is the queen sitting on a thrown.
because a lot of girls would think this, and
that is all they ever realli need.

keep it up.
xx

WOW, this is breathtaking, i hope you have shown/ show this to your friend, if this doesn't open your eyes i don't know what will, excellent, indescribable 5000000/5000000!!!!!

Wow
dat wuz pretty good..nice :D

Very RAW emotions, poor love, hope your friend gets the help she needs? xP

Im sorry about your friend i hope she gets everything worked out.
This was a nice poem with a great flow and full of emotion well done 5/5.

This story is devastating.
Written objectively yet it still captures such emotion and is very strong.

Very tastefully written, i hope your friend is ok.

Aish
xoxo

Mm stanzas lenght are not confrom

no rhyming ,

need more work , the title , is not good , cna be better

i understand the feeling and the drama , but it could be better with some work
!!!
keep up

Wow! this is no Joke; This is Really DEEP !