The End

by Bitter Sweet Angel   May 7, 2008


Push me away and break me apart,
Take all you want from me sweetheart.
Drown me with those eyes I once got lost in,
Make me forget about everything we once been.

I can't live without you,
But this breakup was past due.
So just make this quick and painless,
Rip out my heart and leave me breathless.

I'll reach for your hand,
But all i'll do is crash-land.
Baby its a huge fall,
And I'm ready for it all.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was an okay poem you have some minor errors.

    (Ill) reach for your hand,
    = I'll

    Anyway breaking up is very bad experience.. Most of us here have experience it in our lives. Anyway I hope you feel better. tc

    Thanks for the comment on my poem :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    A sad poem of love. Very simply written. Nice to read!

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