Did you notice?

by here with u   May 7, 2008


I stayed up all night
to wish you happy birthday
i decorated the roof
in my own special way

i wrote on it i love you
and climbed back down the tree
i showed you with a torch at night
but baby did you see?

i wrote a love song just for you
the band played it at the summer fair
by the time i found you it was over
you missed it, did you care?

you know those glow in the dark stars?
i printed them all over the wall
i wrote with them I love you'
then i gave you a call

you said you would be over soon
and that you would stay the night
i really thought you meant it this time
and that everything would be all right

i made some in to heart shapes
so that you could watch them that night in bed
but then you got that important call
and left before it was dark instead

i asked you where you were going
but all you said was 'out'
i couldn't take the lying
thats when i began to scream and shout

did you ever really mean it
that this time you would focus
me and you would work things out?
baby didn't you ever notice?

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  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    This poem has really strong emotions and i really like the beginning
    i think that if you changed the last line of the seventh stanza it would sound better
    good job 4.5/5
    =D